What information in the following text can be delayed to create suspense?One morning, a man took his gun and went into the forest for deer-hunting. After one hour’s search, he saw a deer with very big horns and fired at it. The deer fell just where it stood. He ran over to examine it and said to himself, “This deer’s horns will make a wonderful rack for my guns when I get it home.” He then arranged his gun in the deer’s horns and stepped back a few yards to see exatly how they would look as a gun rack on the wall of his study. He was just admiring the effect when the deer suddenly jumped up, shook itself, and raced away, carrying his gun firmly stuck in its horns. The man had to run after it. Two other hunters passed by and felt very surprised to see a man following a deer’s track in the snow without a gun. They stopped him and asked him whether anything was wrong and whether they could help him. The man sat down beside them and told them his story.
A、From “One morning,…” till “’This deer’s horns will make a wonderful rack for my guns when I get it home.’”
B、He then arranged his gun in the deer’s horns and stepped back a few yards to see exatly how they would look as a gun rack on the wall of his study.
C、“He was just admiring the effect when the deer suddenly jumped up, shook itself, and raced away, carrying his gun firmly stuck in its horns. The man had to run after it.”
D、“They stopped him and asked him whether anything was wrong and whether they could help him.”
A、From “One morning,…” till “’This deer’s horns will make a wonderful rack for my guns when I get it home.’”
B、He then arranged his gun in the deer’s horns and stepped back a few yards to see exatly how they would look as a gun rack on the wall of his study.
C、“He was just admiring the effect when the deer suddenly jumped up, shook itself, and raced away, carrying his gun firmly stuck in its horns. The man had to run after it.”
D、“They stopped him and asked him whether anything was wrong and whether they could help him.”
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01 Describe things 描写物502 Describe senses & foods 描写感官和食物903 Describe people 描写人物704 Describe a place and scenery 描写地方和景色805 Design a well-knitted plot (1) 设计情节(1)406 Design a well-knitted plot (2) 设计情节(2)707 Build characters 人物塑造508 Construct a setting 设置情境609 Think like a writer 像作家一样思考710 Literary style 文学风格711 Design richer narratives 设计丰富的叙述812 After your story is done 故事完结后1013 Present an idea 提出论点514 Organize a point of view 组织论点915 Highlight an argument 突出论证616 Do closed-form writing 规范式论说文写作817 Use evidence 使用证据718 Cause-effect relationship 因果关系819 Comparison and contrast 比较和对比920 Rebuttal 驳论5Final Test期末考试50