What message in the following text can be delayed to create suspense?
It was my girlfriend’s birthday. Early in the morning I told her that I forgot to prepare her birthday gift and would give it to her the next day. She was disappointed but still happy. Then I just gave her a piece of chocolate and told her that I wouldn’t go home with her after school. In fact I decided to give her a CD later. At 5:15 pm I left school a bit earlier than usual, and hurried to catch the bus which my girlfriend would take at the next stop every day. Bus 242 came and I got onto it. It was the very bus I was sure that she would get on at the next stop. I sat quietly at the back of the bus so that she could not see me so easily. The bus stopped and she got on. She stood at the back door. I walked toward her quietly and gave her a great surprise with the CD she had always dreamed of.
A、The identity of my girlfriend
B、The bus number
C、The day being her birthday
D、What gift it was
It was my girlfriend’s birthday. Early in the morning I told her that I forgot to prepare her birthday gift and would give it to her the next day. She was disappointed but still happy. Then I just gave her a piece of chocolate and told her that I wouldn’t go home with her after school. In fact I decided to give her a CD later. At 5:15 pm I left school a bit earlier than usual, and hurried to catch the bus which my girlfriend would take at the next stop every day. Bus 242 came and I got onto it. It was the very bus I was sure that she would get on at the next stop. I sat quietly at the back of the bus so that she could not see me so easily. The bus stopped and she got on. She stood at the back door. I walked toward her quietly and gave her a great surprise with the CD she had always dreamed of.
A、The identity of my girlfriend
B、The bus number
C、The day being her birthday
D、What gift it was
中级英语写作
章节列表
01 Describe things 描写物502 Describe senses & foods 描写感官和食物903 Describe people 描写人物704 Describe a place and scenery 描写地方和景色805 Design a well-knitted plot (1) 设计情节（1）406 Design a well-knitted plot (2) 设计情节（2）707 Build characters 人物塑造508 Construct a setting 设置情境609 Think like a writer 像作家一样思考710 Literary style 文学风格711 Design richer narratives 设计丰富的叙述812 After your story is done 故事完结后1013 Present an idea 提出论点514 Organize a point of view 组织论点915 Highlight an argument 突出论证616 Do closed-form writing 规范式论说文写作817 Use evidence 使用证据718 Cause-effect relationship 因果关系819 Comparison and contrast 比较和对比920 Rebuttal 驳论5Final Test期末考试50